Hot off the press (aka the printer).
The newly-revised draft of the first 150 pages
This is great! A very tight rewrite - more than an edit, this is a re-write of the original idea. Characters have been trimmed, the plot cleared and it is all systems go. This is still the original story but without the detritus. It is sharper and more powerful. I especially loved Amma’s stories at the beginning but the descriptions and storytelling throughout kept me engaged.
Now waiting for the rewrite of the next section!
NOW AVAILABLE ON AMAZON